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poster (rebecca)
- thickness of floor is not realistic- need to think about a material of the floors
- draw a person in my drawing- in order to see how person fits into my space
- height of ceiling on under level is too low- giving the feeling of caging a writer and limiting the freedom of movement in the space.
- overlapping plan should be presented through two different plans
- section and plan cannot be both complicated- make either one of section or plan simple.
- distinguish the elevation with section (cutting part)
A few additional comments to supplement the review:
ReplyDelete-your project has very little sense of material composition and assembly; what is you building made of and how will you show it appropriately?
-the design is crude in certain parts where there is little evidence of an awareness of how materials and parts come together (the east elevation 5-sided window, the strang condition at the adjacent section between the diagonal glazing and the horizontal element, etc.)
-there is a lack of precision, accuracy, and adherence to drawing convention which still pervades the project (such as how to draw windows, ceiling thicknesses, etc.)
-there is little evidence of a clear design intention with respect to the design as expressed in the drawings provided; if you cannot get a student outside the section to look at your drawing set and guess your design intention, the project imagery has failed you