(Stephen) Charrette Drawings, Roof Options, Render

These are my charrette drawings as well as my rhino model with different roof conditions.



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  1. Section ONE8 November 2014 at 10:01

    Outstanding issues that remain:
    - the circling of the centralized writer's space is clean and elegant however its resolution in your design still needs address; narrative sequencing in space is critical to your project so it is highly recommended that you set up at least 6-8 views starting with initial view of the building IN THE LANDSCAPE/CONTEXT, all the way down to the view from the Author's studio desk; once you have the views set, you can adjust the design as you see fit and switch to the requisite views to see the real implications on occupants of the space (as opposed to being optimistic or viewing things from God's perspective)
    -figure out what is going on in the corridor/circulation space; they are neither big enough to be a room nor small enough to be considered a closet


    New Issues from this post:
    - it is evident that the solid walls in your elevation neither help your building integrate into the landscape/context nor provide the best experience for the author within; find ways to break the walls or at the very least find ways to play with the elevation so that it does not read like a utilitarian bunker
    -materials begin showing up however your construction methodology is nonexistent; we will talk about this later on this week but start looking at some wood buildings that offer some insight on the structure that you may wish to expose inside your small project

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