- redesign movable wall (fix proximity of murphy bed and toilet)
- work on context of site
- create several sections (plan, elevational, and perspective) to increase understanding of the functionality of the movable wall.
- Create own legend/conventions for dashed lines to imply movement and to imply the folding out components.
Follow-up:
ReplyDelete-your model might need to be at 1:25 and sectional to showcase the moving elements
-your elevations lack material sensibilities and remember to break the glazing with solid mullions
-your section is strange as it implies a heavy solid roof condition; also USE ORTHOGRAPHICS and not Sectional Perspectives (it is lazy in this instance)
-you know the site plan needs a great deal of work and what you have is unacceptable for the final
-you need interior and exterior perspectives immediately as the design on its own is not adequately showcased in the drawings you have now