Arnel Charrette Results


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  1. Section ONE8 November 2014 at 09:46

    A few quick comments on this project:
    -there still is a lack of termination condition in this project (the extrusion dilemma) especially as it is not clear as to how you wish to deal with the other elevations (limited drawings)
    -the section does not help much as it implies strange components and awkward spaces to work within (given the roof profile, there are some questions about how you intend on using the space); the section also highlights your design as working from outside to inside; who would ever see the slat treatment on the roof? and how often?
    -the plan also needs significant refinement not only to focus on what the author will do in the building and how, but also to clearly showcase basic things such as how people would even get inside it

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